Original poem:
If you are a dreamer, come in, If you are a dreamer, a wisher, a liar, A hope-er, a pray-er, a magic bean buyer... If you're a pretender, come sit by my fire For we have some flax-golden tales to spin. Come in! Come in!
Our poem:
Tower
If you are a dream, come in, If you are , a wisher, a liar, A hope-er, a -er, a bean... If you're a, come sit by fire For we have- tales spin. Come in!
- Silverstein
If you are a dream, come in, If you are , a wisher, a liar, A hope-er, a -er, a bean... If you're a, come sit by fire For we have- tales spin. Come in!
- Silverstein
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look i made into you blog. haha I really liked your performance piece everyone got to participate in changing someone's original poem it was a really good idea
ReplyDeleteI really loved the interaction you gave everyone, it was really really great idea. You enabled the user(s) to take something and make it their own, it was just really great, it turned out to be a beautiful poem I loved it.
ReplyDeleteI love the idea of a perfect poem! You did a fantastic job at bringing audience interaction into the final project. You did a fantastic job.
ReplyDeleteVery cool performance. I like how you incorporated your writing/english major into the piece, giving it more a taste of you. I really like how the poem turned out after we all manipulated it. It shows a lot how the simple change of one word can turn writing into something totally different. Great job!
ReplyDeletei really liked this presentation, it really had a great representation about some of the work that was going on with the dada movement. great job
ReplyDeleteI loved this idea......it kind of reminded it of mine on how random it made everything
ReplyDeleteyou had a great idea, very simple, but extremely altering. great project!
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